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July 6, 2008
Heart-boats by =SorrowBurn, is an interesting blend of romance, imaginative mystique and also includes the magical pull of the element of the sea.
Featured by LadyLincoln
Suggested by Orestiad
Literature Text
Give me a song, worth singing from the heights of a clifftop,
over to calm the raging seas,
a pinnacle point, to quash the rage of the oceans.
Come to my side, in the pouring rain and howling wind.
Let the squall lash your dark hair across your pale face,
turn your seagreen eyes unto mine night sky blue's.
Here layeth the raging storms of torrential emotion,
which poured forth from a broken, bruiséd and shattered heart.
Here you sung to the storms, though they railed against you,
your steady, confident gentleness soothed the wrath away.
Now together, within my walls we sit and confide in each other,
share long passed secrets and long lost stories.
Between the walls, you and I, we grew to love, in secret,
though quiet, our love grew warmer day to day.
Turning to replace the storms of fear, to storms of passion.
And the vessels of our hearts deftly skim the waves of our love,
no serpents from the deep snap at the keels anymore,
as together we conquered them.
On days of calm we sit among the shingle beaches,
to watch the warming sunset on our heart-boats.
Your hand in mine, like crossed oars, a fishing-village marriage,
no one can help but smile at us, even the wizened old skippers,
they say our love is a beacon brighter than the lighthouse.
I heard folk tales of you and I,
from the days when I used to read to the seas,
to calm them for the fishermen.
They said the seas listened to me,
the fabled merfolk too.
A long time passed since you were a dancer,
on the breakers my love,
you were taken by the sea with a wrong step,
but the sea gave you back,
gave you to me.
You heard me reading, they say,
and remembered who you are,
and remembered your heart,
and remembered you love.
As we sit here now, the clifftop, our pinnacle adored,
I smile to you and silently thank the seas,
for bringing you back to me.
over to calm the raging seas,
a pinnacle point, to quash the rage of the oceans.
Come to my side, in the pouring rain and howling wind.
Let the squall lash your dark hair across your pale face,
turn your seagreen eyes unto mine night sky blue's.
Here layeth the raging storms of torrential emotion,
which poured forth from a broken, bruiséd and shattered heart.
Here you sung to the storms, though they railed against you,
your steady, confident gentleness soothed the wrath away.
Now together, within my walls we sit and confide in each other,
share long passed secrets and long lost stories.
Between the walls, you and I, we grew to love, in secret,
though quiet, our love grew warmer day to day.
Turning to replace the storms of fear, to storms of passion.
And the vessels of our hearts deftly skim the waves of our love,
no serpents from the deep snap at the keels anymore,
as together we conquered them.
On days of calm we sit among the shingle beaches,
to watch the warming sunset on our heart-boats.
Your hand in mine, like crossed oars, a fishing-village marriage,
no one can help but smile at us, even the wizened old skippers,
they say our love is a beacon brighter than the lighthouse.
I heard folk tales of you and I,
from the days when I used to read to the seas,
to calm them for the fishermen.
They said the seas listened to me,
the fabled merfolk too.
A long time passed since you were a dancer,
on the breakers my love,
you were taken by the sea with a wrong step,
but the sea gave you back,
gave you to me.
You heard me reading, they say,
and remembered who you are,
and remembered your heart,
and remembered you love.
As we sit here now, the clifftop, our pinnacle adored,
I smile to you and silently thank the seas,
for bringing you back to me.
Literature
Scrutiny
And when I am formulated, sprawling on a pin,
When I am pinned and wriggling on the wall,
Then how should I begin
~ T.S. Eliot, "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
I am going through the keyless gate
to watch and wait,
to wander here and there among the proud,
among the white and old whose wisdom rots, repressed, untold:
the soporific royals wreathed in leaves of gold.
And to them I shall read aloud from the Book,
read of the sins their lips have took
and upon me they shall look and patiently reflect
I am lost in my own depth, I will say
in a slight, impartial way
(for I lack violets and an antic prin
Literature
Lake Windermere
We are sometime tourists,
forever wanderers
in open topped buses
tie-dyed amongst Mercedes.
Stringy haired,
smelling of campfire smoke,
our pockets filled with menthol cigarettes,
tin whistles,
and skipping stones.
We find ourselves
basking in the glow of laughter
under the dripdrip
of cave music.
Beers and sticky chocolate bars
fill our tattered canvas bags,
alongside leather flip flops,
discarded for bare footed expeditions
amongst spiders
bloodchilling streams
and daisy chains.
Literature
Arthur Nobody
Arthur works the night shift at a generically scummy bar so that he can sit all day in a coffee shop and write like the bohemian he can't really afford to be. This will not be a major contextual issue.
He sits now as he does every day, abusing the good-natured "free refill" system, drinking enough caffeine to relieve the fact that he works all night and drinks (coffee) all day. Sleeping fits into the equation in patches without regularity. He sleeps when his body requires it, and his body sometimes requires it when he's in the middle of doing something else. He sleeps when on the bus and misses his stop, or dozes as he is about to
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More seafaring poetry.
The epilogue to this piece.
Edit:
I'm speechless! Thankyou so much *Deadrosebud!
Thank you all for the favs and comments.
Wow, I'm literally speechless!
Thanks also to ^LadyLincoln.
Just, dunno quite what to say yet.
The epilogue to this piece.
Edit:
I'm speechless! Thankyou so much *Deadrosebud!
Thank you all for the favs and comments.
Wow, I'm literally speechless!
Thanks also to ^LadyLincoln.
Just, dunno quite what to say yet.
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of all the things ive been fortunite to have witnessed you write this this right here made me jump even farther then the others to get to the next line absolutly timeless homie this is one of those writes that make you immortal
Now together, within my walls we sit and confide in each other,
share long passed secrets and long lost stories.
Between the walls, you and I, we grew to love, in secret,
though quiet, our love grew warmer day to day.
Turning to replace the storms of fear, to storms of passion
this is the part that made me go "damn thats deep" lool (in a sorta sense it reminded me of that scene in v for vendetta when v puts evee in the jail situation)
i heard a wise man say you could never understand someone unless youve been through the same kinda pain
Now together, within my walls we sit and confide in each other,
share long passed secrets and long lost stories.
Between the walls, you and I, we grew to love, in secret,
though quiet, our love grew warmer day to day.
Turning to replace the storms of fear, to storms of passion
this is the part that made me go "damn thats deep" lool (in a sorta sense it reminded me of that scene in v for vendetta when v puts evee in the jail situation)
i heard a wise man say you could never understand someone unless youve been through the same kinda pain