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I am a collector,
I collect footsteps.
Wherever I choose to go, I go,
unbridled and unfettered.
Every memorised snapshot
of the places I never knew existed
bear witness to my travelling.
The moon and stars are my proof of life,
every broken blade of grass underfoot,
tells more stories of my continuum.

Where to go is never a question,
more the way of life, to travel on,
to see more of the world than you're used to.

To find home, perhaps, or to seek the place
where your soul feels it belongs.

Be that anywhere, from the frozen tundra, to the scorching desert,
I wander, my mind and I, along age old pathways and newtrodden ground.

I collect my footsteps with snapshot memories,
and when I'm too old to carry on my collection,
I can recollect, with the people I've collected along the way,
those I've grown to love, to admire, to respect and adore,
I'll share with them my traverses and my triumphs,
my hardships and dangers,
perils overcome and the return journey,
the one that never seems as long as the first.

When it's time to depart this world,
I'll wander to the next,
as I wandered in this one,
I'll collect more footsteps and memories,
people and perhaps another sense of belonging,
carry on my existance and collection on another plane of being,
and another,
and another.

The paths are endless, I'll travel forever,
for I am a collector, I collect footsteps,
I collect memories,
I collect companions,
I collect,
for I am a collector.
:iconcaptainozz:
Life's just a long, long, long journey and everything in it is just a collection.
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*CrimsonCravenheart Dec 11, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
i love the use of imagery and the repetition of 'collect' used in a broader sense; kinda reminds me of Aragorn in a weird sorta way, coz he was a ranger and it feels like its him speaking....
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Mood: Joy ~Earthmagic Nov 16, 2007   Photographer
I think this is wonderful! Whether or not we realize it, be are all collectors. Hopefully while we go through this journey of ours we also are students and teachers. I do not feel I am qualified to give "Advanced Critique"....just qualified to enjoy!
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~OLSPUR Jul 17, 2007   Photographer
Excellent!
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:iconas-death-becomes-her:
I can't find the words to express how much I love this poem. Please trust that your words have touched my soul.
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:iconspiritunleashed:
i like the imagery. it seems to have an almost pessimistic view of life. the metaphor would be perfect except that that the collector is detached from the collection, higher sometimes, others not. it's interesting and in a way i agree, but in a bigger way i don't. nice job, good flow.
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:iconmllepoivre:
I don't feel I'm knowledgeable enough to offer an advanced critique, but I would like to say that this is a lovely poem.
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:iconrider-on-the-storm:
this really fits my life last week.
traveling across america and what not.

all the images from the ending stanza
really capture my trip. :)
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:iconkaelthiere:
Excellent mmm i dont remember the word, but the image you create is very nice you bring a lot of space for free interpretation.

Your mind is beautiful.
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:iconmadles:
this is life as we know it ,from first steps to last ,and we walk and learn.my motto is i wish i was still 20 and know what i know now! ....well written hun ,few spellings need correcting but wow its me :hug:
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:iconcaptainozz:
Point out spelling errors please?
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