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A cold hard stare,
that's all I have left.

I can't look at you,
I can't speak to you,
I can't tell you...
anything.

I'm leaving,
something.

I'm going,
somewhere.

I'm doing,
nothing.

About,
anything.

Cardinal,
the red.
Caged bird,
flight.

Or a pair of clipped wings?

Autumn embraces,
winter strangles.

A dirty black ribbon,
from the veins.
(Think of this how you will.)

Colour fades away,
bleeds into night.

I'll leave you a message,
before I leave.

My hope will remain just for you,
I think you know why,
I think you know who I am,
I think, not.

So I'll leave you a message;

Tell me you're safe,
even if you don't hear me.
Tell me you love me,
even if I don't beleive it.
Tell me I'm going to be ok,
even though I'm not.

Tell me you'll be there,
to break my fall,
even though you're nowhere near me,
even though I'm nowhere at all.

Tell me I'll get better,
even when I won't.
Tell me,
even though I won't hear...

So I hope that when you get this message
you might know how much I...
...Nevermind.
:iconcaptainozz:
I don't have comments for this really, though before you ask, no, I'm not leaving DA.

Sorry if you were hopeful. ;p
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:icondaiuski:
:glomp: (because i can ^^)
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:icondaiuski:
O_o wow its awesome i luvs it ^^
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:iconpandoras-emptiness:
~Pandoras-Emptiness Jan 9, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
very good!
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:iconhiddendusk:
:giggle: Well, I'm glad you're not leaving dA.
This was well written.
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:iconlillith-sweetblood:
I'll be there to break your fall in anyway I can. ...so many other things I have to say about this poem..but I think I may note it instead.
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:icondancing-naked:
~Dancing-Naked Dec 30, 2006   General Artist
I hope ... I could be the one to tell you ... everyline ... would be true.
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~Dancing-Naked Dec 30, 2006   General Artist
I hope they tell you, I hope one day you'll hear.

Maybe you should just try telling your self.

You'll only ever hear what you belive any where.

You've got a large group of people waiting to tell you + everything +

Then again + I know there are somethings Iød love for you to say.

The poem + is .... a twisted messege that you've said before in most of what you write + but it still ... melts me, makes me think ... and blows alot of other writers out of the sea.

-meh.
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:iconsatanicmilkshake:
I like this, ALOT. It really describes exactly what I'm going through right now :-/
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~BrokenxxReverie Dec 29, 2006  Student General Artist
I kinda lost you on the cardinal thing and came back to you at the I'll leave you a message. Maybe it was the colors seemed to distract my thoughts from your other words. Probably just me though.
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